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the rain beats a drum

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A room floods with bright sight
through some weather beaten skylight

                     Lovingly crafted
                     by careful fingers of lightning,
                     with rain and rolling thunder
                                Perhaps of an evening
                                not unlike this.


I clamber, climb up through
rotten wood.
                        Beams like branches –

                              Supporting no ceiling
                              but our smouldering moon.


We bask in reflections from rooftops,
Side by side
       on slimy green slate

             to spy
             our approaching sky.

All at once –
White light
and deep rumble.

                A solacious voice,
                Wild as wind
                Whispers –

                          "thirty four days".
this also needs work. help please.
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FallenOpenHer's avatar
agree with the other comment, just works. i think its got good balence and rythm and urges you to keep reading on!!